I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora Sypro, We liked the image of the pancakes, they looked delicious. Adriana wanted to eat them! We also liked the front cover of your book. We liked the emjois you used. We have been using book creator too. Hannah liked that we could tell that your book was about good conversations and not so good conversations. Can you please leave a comment on our blog? From Room 10:)
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Kia ora Sypro,
ReplyDeleteWe liked the image of the pancakes, they looked delicious. Adriana wanted to eat them! We also liked the front cover of your book. We liked the emjois you used. We have been using book creator too. Hannah liked that we could tell that your book was about good conversations and not so good conversations. Can you please leave a comment on our blog?
From Room 10:)